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Leyva 2
Samantha Leyva
Ms. Jones
English 102-107
17 October 2019
TEAL
Thesis: Grandma and Manley Pointer are characters who are both hypocrites, but Pointer uses religion to manipulate Hulga.
Topic Sentence:
Topic Sentence:
Topic Sentence:
Grandma is considered a hypocrite for her dishonesty. |
As well as Grandma, Manley Pointer is a hypocrite for lying about who he is. |
Manley Pointer uses religion to manipulate Hulga. |
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Analysis |
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In addition, Pointer continues to manipulate Hulga. |
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Body # 1
T- Grandma is considered a hypocrite for her being a dishonesty woman.
E- Grandma is a reason as to why the her family was in trouble: “The thought was so embarrassing that she [turn] red in the face and her eyes [dilate] and her feet [jump] up, setting her valise in the corner[…] The grandmother was [curl] under the dashboard, hoping she was injured so that bailey’s wrath would not come down on her all at once. The horrible thought she [have] [have] before the accident was that the house she had [remember] so vividly was not in Georgia but in Tennessee” (O’Connor 521).
A – If Grandma was honest, her family would have been safe. Her lying caused her family to get into a wreck.
L- Grandma wants to be injured so that she would not be blamed for the lie she told.
Body # 2
T- As well as Grandma, Manley Pointer is a hypocrite for lying about who he is.
E- Pointer adds drama to the story by stating “And you needn’t to think you’ll catch me because Pointer [is not] really my name. I use a different name at every house. I call at and [do not] stay anywhere long” (O’Connor 540).
A- Manley pretend to be a good Christian man who sold bible books.
L- He lies about being sick and being an honest man. He is far worse than what he said he is.
Body #3
T- Manley Pointer uses religion to manipulate Hulga. He constantly asks her to show him her leg and she does.
E- Pointer adds suspense to the story “He leaned the other way and [pull] the valise toward him and [open] it. It had a pale blue spotted lining and there were only two bibles in it. He took one of these out and [open] the cover of it. It was hollow and [contain] a pocket flask of whiskey, a pack of cards, and a small blue box with printing on it. He laid these out in front of her one at a time in an evenly spaced row, like one presenting offerings at the shrine of a goddess. He put the blue box in her hand. THIS PRODUCT TO BE USED ONLY FOR THE PREVENTION OF DISEASE” (O’Connor 539).
A- Hulga believes that Pointer was a good person and she wants to show him every side of who she was.
L – When she discovers that he is not who he said he was, she feels afraid and embarrassed for believing him.
Body #4
T- In addition, Pointer continues to manipulate Hulga.
E- Manley tells Hulga that he has manipulated other customers:” ‘I’ve gotten a lot of interesting things […] One time I got a woman’s glass eye this way […] You [are not] so smart” (O’Connor 540).
A- Pointer’s hypocrisy caused Hulga to lose something that she depends on.
L- Without her leg, Hulga is left in the dark and embarrassed of how she was tricked.
Thesis Restatement
Repeat, using new wording, the most important ideas: the ideas that you really want your reader to remember.
Manley Pointer and Grandma are characters who put up of the act of being something they are not, But Pointer uses religion to use others. |
Flannery O’Connor is a Christian writer. O’Connor’s stories are considered Southern Gothic. Her stories were about organized religion and hypocrisy.
Good Country People is about a family who believes that the bible salesman, Manley Pointer, is a good Christian man, but soon realize that he is just manipulating them
. A Good Man is Hard to Find is about another family who take a trip to Florida, but end in a predicament because of the Grandma.
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